You are you, and I am me;
But standing together, it’s we.
Through your ups, and in my downs;
Hand in hand, we paint the towns.
But if we never bond together;
Sheltering each-other, in this dark weather.
You will see, what happens ensue;
Drowning in this deep ocean blue.
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(The word blue denotes pain, loneliness, misery & conflict)
Written for GO DOG GO CAFร’s Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge. Todayโs prompt: Write a poem using the phrase โif we neverโ
Wrote a poem with a rhyming scheme after a very long time. ๐
Lovely!
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๐ thanks
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The subtle wordlplay and the imagery is wonderful in this poem. Thanks for following me, fellow talented blogger ๐
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Thank you ๐ You write beautifully. It’s a pleasure to read your posts.
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Beautiful ๐ hand in hand we paint towns๐๐
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Thank you so much ๐
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When I becomes we, a lot can be overcome….. beautifully done ๐
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Yes, we can overcome so much more than just I can ๐ Thanks a lot!
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โบ๏ธ Nice .
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Thanks
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I like the rhyming in this.
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Thanks โบ๏ธ
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Beautiful. Thank you
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Thanks ๐
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So beautifully written Priya !!
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Thanks Nima ๐
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My pleasure dear ๐
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A beautiful piece.
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Thank you so much ๐
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