
I have loved you for a long time
So, will you be my valentine?
A ring on your finger bare
To show you my utmost care
Let time’s spell hold its sway
As we dance the night away
I have loved you for a long time
So, will you be my valentine?
Written for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Saturday Mix– Octelle.
The Octelle, created by Emily Romano, is a poem consisting of eight lines using personification and symbolism in a telling manner. The syllable count structure for this verse is 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8, and the rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa. The first two lines and the last two lines are identical.
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Thank you, Roshni π
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Beautiful, loved it Priya! I dint know this form of poetry. I have a few lines drafted, this post is urging me to modify it to suit an octelle π
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Your comment has made me very happy. π I’m glad this inspired you and I would love to read your octelle, if you write one. All the best! ππΌ
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Thanks a lot, Aashi ππ
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