
These mysteries, secrets and lies
Lay buried in the sands of time
Await their moment to rise.
Death, trailing in the shadowed disguise
Judges our paths begrime
These mysteries, secrets and lies.
Jewels, gems and most prized dimes
That men sought, lost to torrid clime
Await their moment to rise.
Broiling, the land where water dries
Mirages, they make you see rime
These mysteries, secrets and lies.
Those eras of allies and assize
That we’d thought lost to change’s chime
Await their moment to rise.
Our deeds through footprints incise
The desert has accrued in its lifetime
These mysteries, secrets and lies
Await their moment to rise.
This is my first attempt at a villanelle. Inspired by Aashi (of Falling upwards), whose villanelles are simply beautiful.
A villanelle is a fixed-form poem consisting of five tercets and a quatrain and also follows a specific rhyme scheme using only two different sounds. There are 19 lines in total and follows a rhyme scheme of ABA ABA ABA ABA ABA ABAA. In a villanelle, two different lines repeat throughout the poem; where first line recurs as lines 6, 12, and 18, and the third line recurs as lines 9, 15, and 19.
Written for Sadje’s What Do You See #46. Does this picture inspire you to write something?
© 2020, Cozy Quiet Corner.
This was indeed a very beautiful attempt.😍
These mysteries, secrets and lies
Lay buried in the sands of time…..
Wow, absolutely love these line❤❤
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Thank you so much, Aashi 😊
I’m very happy that you liked my attempt. Your poems truly inspire me 💖
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My pleasure! I’m so glad that you like my poems❤❤ Thank you very very much🤗🤗
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My absolute pleasure 😊🌸
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This is so well written Priya. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you Sadje 😊 Each week, your prompt pics make me explore my creativity ❤️ thanks for hosting it.
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Thanks 😊
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Really loved the way you have written♥️
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Thank you so much 😊🌸
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Beautiful attempt … loved the try .. I like it when line repeats in a poem. It gives a haunting feeling ❤️😊
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🤗 Thank you so much, HS. This means a lot to me 💚 I was a little nervous before posting it 🙈
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I know that feeling .. guess that happens to most of us ….. and see …. how much it gets appreciated!!! 🙌😊👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Yes! 😁 I’m grateful for it. 😄
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Beautiful lines loved it ❤
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Thanks a lot, dear 😊🌸
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What a lovely composition Priya ♥️
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I’m really happy you enjoyed it. Thanks Radhika! 🤗
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Wow!! This is gorgeous!
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Thank you so so much 😊💙
Really happy that you liked it.
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Loved it 💙
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Thank you so much, dear 🤗💟
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anytime 😊
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Perfectly written Priya… and loved the mysterious thought that echoes throughout !!
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Very beautiful attempt Priya. Loved your creativity.
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Thank you so much, Yeshu 😊💙
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Thank you so much, dear Nima 🤗💟
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I read this poem just because of “sands of time” 😍❤️ BEAUTIFUL.
Keep writing cause your words create magic 🦋🏜️
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😊🤗 Thank you so much, dear ❤️ Your comments make me so happy!
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Beautifully done. The form works so well for the subject.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Chris 😊
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