The fall of the foggy veil,
Obscures the sight from my gaze;
Of these shining relics of grandeur,
Symbolising strength to endure.
Riding with the gushing waters below,
The darkness seems to grow;
And standing by the bridge I know,
The bright lights shall guide the path to go.
Written for Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge #82.
I’ve just written down my feelings when I saw this pic. It made sense in my head, not sure how it turned out here.
© 2020, Cozy Quiet Corner.
Amazing !
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Thank you so much! 🌸
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pleasure 😊
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This turned out stunningly. Do not doubt yourself, dear poet. I enjoy reading your work and the different styles and emotions you entwine in each piece. This one is a beauty with dark themes, especially as it pertains to the image. Amazing writing! ❤
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Thank you so much, Lucy 😍
Your appreciative words mean so much to me 🤗
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It turned out just fine!
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Thank you❣️
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This is superb!!
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Thank you so much 🤗
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This sounds really nice
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Thank you Christin 🤗
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This is beautiful!!!
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Thank you❣️😊
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Well penned, Priya✨👍
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Thank you, my dear Nathi ❤️❤️
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You’re most welcome 😇
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Beautiful! 🤍
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Beautiful writing, is it Priya?🌼
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Thank you! 😊
Sorry, I didn’t understand the question 🙈
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I just found your blog and your poetry is quite deep…. keep up the good work !
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Thank you so much, Akriti 😊 Nice to meet you.
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