Lying down on the pavement, head on my rucksack, I observe the people rushing about.
Hurrying everywhere.
Heads down, scrolling through their phone.
Some wear headphones.
So busy with their lives, no time to stop.
To observe.
To learn.
To breathe.
To realise, to enjoy.
You’re alive!
Written for Cyranny’s 1 Min Fiction.
What’s the “One Minute Fiction” challenge about?
Each week I’ll provide a prompt to inspire you to write a very short story. The idea is to manage to type your whole story in a minute or less. Of course, you can think about it before hitting the keyboard, and you can take all your time to edit it afterwards…
© 2020, Cozy Quiet Corner.
No one has time these day to breathe! Nice take!❤
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Thank you, Nawazish! 😊 We’re too busy to sit back and reflect these days.
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Nice take!! Described so well
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Thank you so much ☺️🌸
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True, well described. 🙂
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💖 thank you!!
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You are welcome, Priya. 🙂
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Well done!
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Thank you, Aashi 💜
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So True! 👍 😊
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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Very nice 👌 👍
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Thanks a lot, Dulcy 🤗
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I love the sound of this one minute fiction. Well done, Priya 😃
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Thank you so much, Shweta 😁 Short tales are harder to craft than longer ones! 🙈
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The irony of today’s life.
Well written.
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Yes, it is
😊 Thanks a lot!
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Thank you so much for your participation 🙂 I really enjoyed your take on the prompt! I think we would all benefit from taking the time to stop and contemplate our lives…
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Thanks a lot! I loved the pic. 💚 Thanks for hosting this prompt.
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You’re very welcome… I hope the upcoming pictures will inspire you just as much 😉
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😊
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