1 Min Fiction #4

Rick gently guided his blindfolded girlfriend out of the car, turning her to face the entrance.

“You can open your eyes now,” he said, tugging the cloth off her face.
Violet’s eyes sparkled, as her lips broke into wide grin.

“You brought me to a carnival!” She squealed, giving him a big hug.
He remembered, she thought, though we were sleepy and I had just mumbled it.

“Come on,” he whispered, exchanging a quick kiss “Let’s start with the Ferris Wheel.”

Written for Cyranny’s “One Minute Fiction” challenge.
What is it?
Each week I’ll provide a prompt to inspire you to write a very short story. The idea is to manage to type your whole story in a minute or less. Of course, you can think about it before hitting the keyboard, and you can take all your time to edit it afterwards…

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  1. Cute little story πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ¦‹
    Although i was expecting a dark ending πŸ˜πŸ˜‚ i thought it’ll end like:
    “& Then he slit her throat”…

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