Leaning patterns in symmetry
A display of arranged beauty,
These half circles and tall scale
Do build our world in detail
As I look at the lines squared
I find my senses ensnared,
Leaning patterns in symmetry
A display of arranged beauty.
Reena is the host of Reena’s Exploration Challenge– The prompt #157 is the above picture.
The Octelle is a poem consisting of eight lines. The syllable count structure for this verse is 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8, and the rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa. The first two lines and the last two lines are identical.
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Ah yes, they create a beautiful pattern. Nice one Priya!!
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Thank you so much for your appreciative comment, Radhika 🤗🌹
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These patterns are indeed beautiful. Well written, Priya. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Aishwarya 🌸 Glad you liked them 😊
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You are welcome, Priya. 🙂
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The form is lovely and you captured the patterns beautifully, Priya.
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Thank you so much, Punam 😊🌸Happy to know this!
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Awesome 👌 you have expressed so nicely 😀 💕
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Thank you so much, my dear 💙
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Beautifully penned! We sometimes miss the obvious in search of symbolism, but you have captured what you see.
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Thank you so much! 😍🤗 So happy that you liked it!
Yes, symbolism and abstract are fine, but sometimes it’s good to write about the simple and visible.
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It is done wonderfully.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
The Patterns …. by cozyquietcorner
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This is very intriguing and creative too.💜
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Thanks a lot, Jude! 🤗💜
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A pleasure 🌼🧡
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Simple and beautiful.
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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Welcome, dear.
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Everything is beautiful in symmetry. ☺️
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Thank you so much, Joana 🤗
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You’re welcome 🤗
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I love the symmetry!
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Thank you 😊🌸
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