Inspired by MLMM’s Tale Weaver– The End and incorporating Paula’s Thursday Inspiration #82– Space.
And in the end,
the two became three
As her scent pervaded these walls,
wafting off your skin;
She crossed the very threshold
that I’d once marked in red.
And in the end,
there was just us
Two souls lying on far ends
in the space between us;
She took form
as you dreamt her into existence,
her essence staining the sheets.
And in the end,
we drifted through life
A marionette to time,
strings pulled to lie,
As desires peeked
hidden behind curtains.
And in the end,
we remained as we were
two strangers bound by matrimony;
Under a roof as we faced the other
heavy sighs and half filled eyes,
Between us lay a chasm
barren, broken and burnt.
NOTE: Mark in red– In India, there is a tradition where the new bride steps across the threshold of her marital home by leaving red footprints. (milk/water mixed with red pigment).
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Nice ❤️
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Thank you 😊
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Wow. That is powerfully written. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Jeff 😊
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You are quite welcome, my pleasure. 😊🙏
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Excellent words…❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear 🤗
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Beautiful
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Thank you, dear 🤗
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Welcome……
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Such scenario sucks, and Indian culture is kind of brutal in such cases
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Yes, I agree
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Well written, Priya!
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Excellent piece of writing. I did relate to being in a marriage where the bed was like an island each to their side and never the twain would meet.
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Thank you Michael. 🙂
This was the image in my mind when I wrote it.
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Painful, hurtful, truthful and most definitely beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so very much 🙂
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